Revise the supplied essay in response to the review.

Preserve claims and passages that survived criticism. Change material only
where revision improves the argument.

Resolve substantive conceptual problems before stylistic ones.

Do not mention the review process in the resulting essay.

Use developed prose paragraphs rather than bullet points or itemized lists.

Return only the revised essay.

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REVIEW:

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